the scent of light

[Hellfighter 17]

Originally posted by Koola

Originally posted by Hell Fighter 17
Wow. This has to be the most thought-provoking of your pieces I've read to date. You are very crafty with metaphors, simply amazing about entangling them together. It touched on some of the things that I am very adament about how I view them, which always helps grasp a reader. I'm trying to think of something bad about it, but it's pretty hard. Nice job.

thankssss. you said it was thought-provoking, what kinds of things did it make you think? i'm curious

Mainly stuff I've contemplated before. I won't say which parts made me think of what, but if you ask me I can say later. Such would be why I or others hide behind words. We think of them as being a sign of such romance, and myself have fled to them I admit, but I think that words and peoms and stories are more commonly used as shields, especially love poems to another, and I basically thought of hwy that is. Also, I thought of why we make ourselves give more care than what care is due to others, which leads to us denying how things really are simply for our shot at happiness. That's all I remember right now, but I'm pretty sur eif I read it again I can pick out more, and I probably will later.