11-03-2005, 06:19 AM
Hehe, the main reason I read yours is because I saw my character's name mentioned. Also because you are so XTREME, but that is always implied, I believe. >.>
To be honest, I have to say it seemed a bit sluggish or choppy, I kind of forget right now, my brain hasn't been working all too well as of late. Things didn't really seem to be happening at all, then all of a sudden it's put on to haipaa speed and your stopping 17? I could follow along, but the pace wasn't very consistent. Although it can be common for things to pick up at the very end, yours was mainly the later quarter. I hope I am making sense. I'm pretty sure I thought it was alright, but my alzheimers is kickin' in now. =P
To be honest, I have to say it seemed a bit sluggish or choppy, I kind of forget right now, my brain hasn't been working all too well as of late. Things didn't really seem to be happening at all, then all of a sudden it's put on to haipaa speed and your stopping 17? I could follow along, but the pace wasn't very consistent. Although it can be common for things to pick up at the very end, yours was mainly the later quarter. I hope I am making sense. I'm pretty sure I thought it was alright, but my alzheimers is kickin' in now. =P
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