06-01-2006, 02:28 PM
It would be fine but we require a 300 word minimum. You are on the right track with the past tense, I would sggest you just start from scratch just to show us you get the drift.
Those three moves are fine, but just as a player, not Staff, I would suggest picking something that will help you RP wise like Solar Flare or Ki Sword instead of two Super Attacks, since you really only need one.
You planet is fine now.
Those three moves are fine, but just as a player, not Staff, I would suggest picking something that will help you RP wise like Solar Flare or Ki Sword instead of two Super Attacks, since you really only need one.
You planet is fine now.
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