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06-09-2006, 08:47 PM
What aspects of my character did I need to flesh out better? I did my best to keep the continual conversations and conflicts between Gero and Twenty at the forefront, and the whole thought process of my character, but I left out a lot of what my character was actually feeling. I made plenty of internal dialogue, but I never really conveyed the uneasiness Twenty felt beneath his arrogant shell, or his drive to surpass A13, or his fear of Bra and SSJ. Should I have gone more into emotional detail, continued to flesh out the mental thought process, or should I have just stuck with physical descriptions?
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