11-09-2005, 02:25 PM
Well Hellfighter, there are no technical problems with your post and I think your problem right now is that you don?t really have anything to RP about. It?s difficult to give you some real C&C when it appears your post is more to fill the requirement for FoF then any hardcore RPing. The emotion just isn?t there.
You have a firm grasp on your style which is uniquely your own. My one piece of advie I guess I can give while your in the story slump is find a creative reason for HF?s new sense of direction. The possibilities are near limitless and I think it will be worth your time to make it part of your character, possibly even something long term.
I?ll throw some ideas back and forth with you on AIM tonight with you and we?ll see if we can find a good path for it to go, though knowing you, you already have something up your sleeve.
You have a firm grasp on your style which is uniquely your own. My one piece of advie I guess I can give while your in the story slump is find a creative reason for HF?s new sense of direction. The possibilities are near limitless and I think it will be worth your time to make it part of your character, possibly even something long term.
I?ll throw some ideas back and forth with you on AIM tonight with you and we?ll see if we can find a good path for it to go, though knowing you, you already have something up your sleeve.
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