Finale Discussion

[Hellfighter 17]

I feel the need to comment on this one.

Hilarious and insightful.

The waffle thing reminded me of during Eighteen's King Kai training. I love people who keep recurring things that only appear every now and then. Very nostalgic. I like how Rad called Eighteen 'Eighteen,' while Stacy called her '18.' I don't know if you are conscious of yourself doing that, but I know I've commented on it and I still liek it, since it makes Rad seem more special concerning her. Much how Anne of Green Gables likes her name to be pronounced 'Anne' instead of 'Ann.'

?Seemed like a good idea at the time.? I love that line. I used this only one time in my stay, and somebody commented on that, so I thought I'd bring it up.

The whole bit about the Bardock scene was insightful. Rad didn't go all emotional, but it was clear that he was uncomfortable about it and his trying to get over it with humour made him three-dimensional.

I laughed through most of it and it was a good read. Congratulations on the win, by the way.