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Joining as Muchii
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Your writing isn't 'bad' it just reads odd. Just take a look at some posts and look at the tense of the verbs being used and compare it to your own.

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Joining as Muchii - by Android-18 - 06-25-2006, 08:39 AM
Joining as Muchii - by Yamu - 06-26-2006, 12:27 PM
Joining as Muchii - by Yamu - 06-26-2006, 02:58 PM
Joining as Muchii - by Yamu - 06-26-2006, 03:50 PM
Joining as Muchii - by Yamu - 06-26-2006, 04:54 PM

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