11-23-2005, 04:19 PM
Hmph. My topic's name was better.
RATING: Oh my God. That was incredible. I've got to admit, some of the dialogue was a little cheesy, and that dragged the score down slightly. You get a Nine. His struggle against himself was quite vibrant. The description you provided was a little much for me, but then, that's mostly opinion on my part. Fantastic job, overall.
http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...post170493
(Short, I know.)
RATING: Oh my God. That was incredible. I've got to admit, some of the dialogue was a little cheesy, and that dragged the score down slightly. You get a Nine. His struggle against himself was quite vibrant. The description you provided was a little much for me, but then, that's mostly opinion on my part. Fantastic job, overall.
http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...post170493
(Short, I know.)
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