11-25-2005, 01:16 AM
Sexy, but there were a few grammatical burps here and there that lowered your score. A simple proofread (even just once through) would have corrected these.
SCORE: 8.
http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...post170943
SCORE: 8.
http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...post170943
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Mal Nova Wrote:I do apologize for using the word rape. There are four separate definitions for the word rape, two of which describe vegetation...

