Rate the Roleplay Above You

[Piccolo Daimoun]

I'm sorry I can't give you a big thing like you did, I just don't have that kind of...critique ability? But I felt I should give you my comments anyway.

I've always liked how you describe things, or how you give statements from your character.

Originally posted by Bojack
This?ll be a long night if there isn?t fire in the kitchen.

Bojack is just...cool...no other way to say it, and the things that led up to this are just...suggestive, and I laughed when I saw it, as I'm sure many others did...

Originally posted by Bojack
?Fair enough. .? The Ader spoke softly, to himself more than the reptile. But it wasn?t fair, Jack surmised. That this child, even of his tender age have to meet the horrors of society. The Ader saw something of himself in this child through eyes whose corners may?ve shown a glint.

This was interesting too...it's just interesting how you describe things, as I've said before. Its so...dark in a way. It's stuff that you put out like this for me that make me want to read whatever you put out next.

I'm giving it an 8, which I would describe as great. Theres only one thing I will suggest, and this is more of a peeve of mine then anything. When a character like myself or BJ is in a post, I think it looks better if you refer to them by their full name, or one part of it. It's more of a opinion suggestion then anything, but thats my two cents.


Bam!

Edit: Damn it! Okay, I'll do yours Recoome...