C&C on my Personal Saga

[Super Buu]

I figure I bin workin' on yonder Personal Saga for some time now. 'Bin proofreading more frequently and thoroughly with more recent posts, the awkward grammatical blips will most likely be in the earlier stuff. Tell me what you like, what you don't like. Is the storyline confusing at all? Too boring? Too shallow? Lemme know what you think. If you leave some feedback, leave a link to something of yours and I'll see what I can do. You can therefore think of this as a Buu's rating centre as well.