08-11-2006, 04:13 PM
Quality is greater than quanitity.
Now, I understand you are not English, but I think a few things could be done before we let you in.
Do you have Microsoft Word? It's a program that allows you to write text documents in it, and it will help you correctly spell words and fix your grammer. I HIGHLY suggest you get this program, it will help you spell and improve your writing.
The other problem is that your paragraphs are way too big. One paragraph is 3-5 sentences. Try to keep them short. If a new character is speaking, he or she gets a new paragraph. Don't make huge blocks of text, every new thought or action deserves a new paragraph.
Now, we do not allow more than one Trunks. So, look here: http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/?roster=1&o...&active=No
That is a list of who you could be, as long as they do NOT have (NPC) or (Retired).
Now, I understand you are not English, but I think a few things could be done before we let you in.
Do you have Microsoft Word? It's a program that allows you to write text documents in it, and it will help you correctly spell words and fix your grammer. I HIGHLY suggest you get this program, it will help you spell and improve your writing.
The other problem is that your paragraphs are way too big. One paragraph is 3-5 sentences. Try to keep them short. If a new character is speaking, he or she gets a new paragraph. Don't make huge blocks of text, every new thought or action deserves a new paragraph.
Now, we do not allow more than one Trunks. So, look here: http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/?roster=1&o...&active=No
That is a list of who you could be, as long as they do NOT have (NPC) or (Retired).
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