08-18-2006, 02:40 AM
Well that RP sample isn't quite up to our standards. Try using Microsoft words, also, quotations don't need spaces between them. Make a new paragraph for each new person speaking, so:
Turles stared at the creature waiting for an answer.
"I can help you..." said the frightened green child.
'Ha, I knew it, I knew this puny thing could not stand my true powers.' thought Turles.
"I've seen some new humans enter the planet." said the creature.
"Well then what are we waiting for!?" screamed the determined sayan.
"Follow me." said the creature.
Turles stared at the creature waiting for an answer.
"I can help you..." said the frightened green child.
'Ha, I knew it, I knew this puny thing could not stand my true powers.' thought Turles.
"I've seen some new humans enter the planet." said the creature.
"Well then what are we waiting for!?" screamed the determined sayan.
"Follow me." said the creature.
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