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Back To My Roots
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12-17-2005, 11:42 PM
Sorry, I will be honest.

Flow sucked, rhymes were weak, you need a larger vocabulary. I really hope you are black by saying well, the "n" word. I don't ever use it, I'm white. It barely flows unless you go with slow metronomes (I think that's what it's called) and your rhythm is off.

You just got critiqued by Wildfire Productions =D

Wildfire Productions

That's me with mostly beats from Shadowville. Those are my crappy songs though. Meh, don't make fun of me people =(
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Back To My Roots - by Claire - 12-17-2005, 10:56 PM
Back To My Roots - by Claire - 12-17-2005, 11:01 PM
Back To My Roots - by Claire - 12-17-2005, 11:03 PM
Back To My Roots - by Abel - 12-17-2005, 11:42 PM
Back To My Roots - by Kaden - 12-18-2005, 12:55 AM
Back To My Roots - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-18-2005, 01:09 AM
Back To My Roots - by Burter Jr - 12-18-2005, 01:21 AM
Back To My Roots - by Abel - 12-18-2005, 03:29 AM
Back To My Roots - by Burter Jr - 12-18-2005, 03:32 AM
Back To My Roots - by Abel - 12-18-2005, 03:35 AM
Back To My Roots - by Sammah - 12-18-2005, 03:42 AM

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