12-30-2005, 10:31 PM
Good job Buu, I didn't read all of it because I'm a bit pressed for time, but I did read a few posts of it.
I really liked it, especially the part where Buu seemed to be overwhelmed with the power of Spiritken, how his voice *I think* amplified.
There were a couple things I was wondering about. Is Buu good now? And if so, why would he willingly put the child in danger? That's the only part I kinda wondered about.
I liked how you had Zanshin speak in old English, and how he rhymed a few of the things he said.
Neat stuff, I hope you do this well in the next stuff that you try.
I really liked it, especially the part where Buu seemed to be overwhelmed with the power of Spiritken, how his voice *I think* amplified.
There were a couple things I was wondering about. Is Buu good now? And if so, why would he willingly put the child in danger? That's the only part I kinda wondered about.
I liked how you had Zanshin speak in old English, and how he rhymed a few of the things he said.
Quote:"Upon thou dost my hatred lie. For my fathers, and people, and myself - DIE!"
Neat stuff, I hope you do this well in the next stuff that you try.