01-05-2006, 05:29 PM
Quote:Originally posted by UubPlease don't instigate a flame and if you look at his latest RP you'll find there is only one paragraph that resembles clumpy.
Quote:Originally posted by Kirano
You need to break up your paragraphs. It gets hard to read when it's a big chunk.
Funny this should come from you.
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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