01-05-2006, 09:38 PM
Quote:Originally posted by Super Buu
I've read almost the first full page of it, before this post, and enjoyed it. The only thing you've gotta remember is that every time a new person speaks, you're supposed to make a new paragraph. Makes it slightly confusing at times. Other than that, still cool.
Making new paragraphs and how you signify new speakers all depend on the writing style. You'll find a multitude of different styles on Chubbs, mine being that I don't do the whole new paragraph new speaker thing.
Though, I wouldn't be surprised for the first page to be confusing. When I first started out, the saga was atrocious.