11-12-2006, 09:55 AM
Your writing sample is much better this time, however it's still only 271 words, and the minimum is 300. Repost your sample with a few more sentences to fill up the count.
Also, we don't allow Body Exchange as a selectable move. You'll have to pick another one. You can also pick a different best move aside from Ki Blast, because everyone can use a general ki blast when they join.
Lastly, you don't need to make a completely separate join post. Just keep replying in this one instead.
Also, we don't allow Body Exchange as a selectable move. You'll have to pick another one. You can also pick a different best move aside from Ki Blast, because everyone can use a general ki blast when they join.
Lastly, you don't need to make a completely separate join post. Just keep replying in this one instead.
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