11-27-2006, 04:35 PM
I thought that was pretty good. You showed a conflict/doubt in Super Buu over him taking a huge responsibility, and I really look forward to reading more. You broke up the paragraphs a bunch, which is thank God, because big blocks - like Burter said - can be tiring. More dialogue keeps the action popping along in your's and others' posts.
That said, I thought your post with Koola was better, but it's understandable that that would be far more gripping than just meeting with the townspeople, given the risk of imminent violence.
Trying to get into a good groove: Campfire Kid Buu
I tried to roleplay 17 a bit since... yeah... Just having one person sitting around in DA not talking at all can be hazardous to your health.
That said, I thought your post with Koola was better, but it's understandable that that would be far more gripping than just meeting with the townspeople, given the risk of imminent violence.
Trying to get into a good groove: Campfire Kid Buu
I tried to roleplay 17 a bit since... yeah... Just having one person sitting around in DA not talking at all can be hazardous to your health.
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