Outcasts C&C

[Warako]

I enjoyed your last RP, I can't really point out any bad errors, not because I'm being nice, but I don't really see any that catch my attention.

I like the description of Buu's feelings of the killers and how they seemed to have affected him, in terms of contemplation of what if this and what if that etc.


EDIT: I said I'd C&C but forgot, your last post reminded me of the promise I made you.