Rate the Roleplay Above You

[Belle Hibiki]

I like the opening to your post, it's very good 'scene setting', laying down the 'law' as it were. This is actually prevalent throughout your post, and I like how you stay 'on message' as Broli, writing things from -his- perspective instead of someone on the outside looking in.

Unfortunately, it's almost completely scene setting, and on the second page of the thread; it doesn't really go anywhere or do anything besides reaffirming what Vegeta has already said. I know that isn't typical for your posts (that and it's a little short), but I give this post a 8/10 - good.

Mine, second post of mine on the page, please. The first is open for commentary, but I don't really feel like I worked on that one... ...Knowing my luck, it's probably the better of the two.