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Unfathomable Uub
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You use a ellipses a lot. They are generally used for dramatic effect in prose, so too much of them is unappealing and takes away from the effect. The same goes for extending a word, like "kamehameha": You add too many vowels and it just looks bad. However, it is still good enough.

You can't have henka beam, though, and Uub won't be open until tomorrow, so bump this then with a replacement move.
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Unfathomable Uub - by Hellfighter 17 - 12-27-2006, 01:38 AM
Unfathomable Uub - by Old Zangya - 12-28-2006, 01:13 AM

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