02-15-2006, 08:42 PM
It (the last post in your Trunky Quest) was alright. The flow was pretty poor, keeping me from really concentrating on your writing. Beyond that, I was having a very tough time figuring out what was really going on. It felt too vague and choppy to really be enjoyable. 6/10
But hey, that?s just me. I?m a picky reader.
http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...post196800
But hey, that?s just me. I?m a picky reader.
http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...post196800
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