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Rate the Roleplay Above You
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02-15-2006, 08:52 PM
Not too bad, although I am not really feelin what you are trying to convey. I ike the witty dialogue, but maybe you can elaborate more on scene details and internal monologue. What is Krillin thinking? What is he really like, inside? Where the heck is he and how does he see it?

Other than that, 8/10


Moi.


EDIT: Also, of noteable mention, not my own, but, is pretty awesome and rateworthy: Bebi's SK training

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Vad: Found my dicks btw
Vad: *DISCS
Kaz: XD!!!!XDXDXD!!
Kaz: oh man
Kaz: that was an awesome typo!
Vad: I MEANT ROUND CYLINDRICAL THINGS
Kaz: XD XD XD
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Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Burter Jr - 11-23-2005, 02:13 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Piper Juunanagou - 11-23-2005, 02:16 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 11-23-2005, 02:58 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Burter Jr - 11-23-2005, 03:03 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 11-23-2005, 04:19 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Rose - 11-23-2005, 05:08 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Claire - 11-23-2005, 05:13 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Rose - 11-23-2005, 05:15 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Hellfighter 17 - 11-23-2005, 06:51 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 11-25-2005, 01:16 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Burter Jr - 11-25-2005, 02:23 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Burter Jr - 11-25-2005, 02:29 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Hellfighter 17 - 11-25-2005, 02:32 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 11-25-2005, 02:47 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Burter Jr - 11-25-2005, 03:22 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 11-25-2005, 12:31 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Piccolo Daimoun - 11-29-2005, 02:18 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Piccolo Daimoun - 11-29-2005, 02:23 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 01-25-2006, 02:21 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Kazuya - 01-25-2006, 03:53 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Broli - 01-25-2006, 04:49 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Belle Hibiki - 01-25-2006, 07:49 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Kazuya - 01-25-2006, 12:32 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Kazuya - 01-27-2006, 07:35 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Piccolo Daimoun - 01-27-2006, 01:49 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 02-15-2006, 08:42 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Kazuya - 02-15-2006, 08:52 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 02-22-2006, 03:35 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by The Terminator - 02-28-2006, 06:54 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Jonathan Meer - 07-25-2006, 09:08 AM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Kaden - 07-25-2006, 04:08 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by CoolSpice - 07-25-2006, 04:58 PM
Rate the Roleplay Above You - by Burter Jr - 07-25-2006, 05:12 PM
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