04-09-2007, 08:04 PM
Quote:Originally posted by Garlic Jr
I'll admit here or there you hit a rhyme
that sounds pleasing at first and after for a time
But what you lack is something called substance
something real that can hit me with a force,
send me reeling and feeling for a source,
of stability, a foot hold, make me say I got told but no,
fuck this ten syllable shit and let me go
Instead you go make my mom a target,
its a routine so old and gone far that
I have to wonder if you're in the past
rapping from the nineteen eighties' ass
there's no maybe that you can't find
a way to crack the shell that my words bind,
so you take potshots,
miss more often than not,
and pretend to rule
when you rank less than my stool
I am spinning a web sticky, for a fly sickly,
thats you, foo', a fucking insect
a rabbi of rhyme, master of a sect,
so far gone from the mainstream that your backwater,
mouth moving and preaching while reaching for a slaughter
only to find yourself empty and done.
I'm gone, keep stuggling for fun
but realize the inevitability, or lose all credibility,
no matter your durability, show come humility and quit.
Giving sperm human traits ftw
"We pissed away all the money on rock n' roll."
-Slash
-Slash

