03-11-2006, 07:12 AM
I'm not gonna lie Jeice, those were some good posts. I did, however, have a few problems.
As my vault says: Sixteen is not the armored android he once was. As of the Red Stallions quest a little while ago, Sixteen is more like the other androids with the exception of a few unmentioned differnces. In other words, he has skin and stuff now.
Also, this may be nitpicking, and you probably don't know this, but Sixteen is not the type to use a lot of Ki attacks. He seldom uses his best moves, the only exception being Circuit Breaker, which he uses sparingly but more often than the others.
And a last thing, though I could be wrong. Your ending was a tad iffy in my opinion. Nothing against you, I just found it hard to believe that Jeice could have deflected Sixteen's attack near the beginning and then have it come back near the end, with the energy of Sixteen's attack mixed, when the Kamehameha usually fizzles out when it stops being powered(I'm not completely positive about this, but it was my assumption).
Just my opinion.
Anywho, i'll have mine up soon.
As my vault says: Sixteen is not the armored android he once was. As of the Red Stallions quest a little while ago, Sixteen is more like the other androids with the exception of a few unmentioned differnces. In other words, he has skin and stuff now.
Also, this may be nitpicking, and you probably don't know this, but Sixteen is not the type to use a lot of Ki attacks. He seldom uses his best moves, the only exception being Circuit Breaker, which he uses sparingly but more often than the others.
And a last thing, though I could be wrong. Your ending was a tad iffy in my opinion. Nothing against you, I just found it hard to believe that Jeice could have deflected Sixteen's attack near the beginning and then have it come back near the end, with the energy of Sixteen's attack mixed, when the Kamehameha usually fizzles out when it stops being powered(I'm not completely positive about this, but it was my assumption).
Just my opinion.
Anywho, i'll have mine up soon.

