Burter Advice

[Burter]

@Blue:

Same advice as Celipa. Stand out more or you're just another name to me, and I won't care. That was your problem last year; I just had no interest for your character.

@Grandpa Gohan:

I honestly think you have a serious shot to win the entire thing. I love your character, and you have a creative way to make me just keep wanting to find out more about him.

Your downfall is going to be being outshined by possible allies. You don't want to stick with anybody that you yourself can't beat in a fight

@Akane:

Same advice/downfall as Gramps. Your writing needs no critism.

@Paragus:

A lot of people need to either go solo or stick with someone they can beat. You're different. I think you would benefit from a partner that you can interact with through the game, or at least until they die. I think you should find an opposite for Paragus and use that relationship as a writing strategy

@Olibu:

You have a way of giving me a fantastic character, without actually being a steller writer. I'm sure your writing has only gotten better since last year.

The main thing is to step up the writing and try to keep both eyes open in terms of strategy. Everyone is gonna play this game, so don't be naive.

@Gokua:

Sorry, I'm gonna need to see some pre show stuff