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#36
05-10-2007, 04:15 AM
I think you need to do something different too, Bra. Like some of the others, I can predict pretty much everything Bra would be in this game.

Zangya, you need to make things flow a little better. Your writing is solid, but I lost track in your sign-up post pretty quick, and it was way too long. I was bored pretty quickly. My advice is to break your ideas down into multiple roleplays, or cut out some ideas. Bottom line is I can't stand long roleplays unless you are REALLY good at it
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Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-09-2007, 01:48 AM
Burter Predictions - by Paragus - 05-09-2007, 01:48 AM
Burter Predictions - by Olibu - 05-09-2007, 01:49 AM
Burter Predictions - by Aero - 05-09-2007, 01:50 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-09-2007, 01:53 AM
Burter Predictions - by Android 17 - 05-09-2007, 01:55 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-09-2007, 01:55 AM
Burter Predictions - by Grandpa Gohan - 05-09-2007, 02:01 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-09-2007, 02:05 AM
Burter Predictions - by Yamu - 05-09-2007, 02:11 AM
Burter Predictions - by Celipa - 05-09-2007, 02:12 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-09-2007, 02:12 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-09-2007, 02:13 AM
Burter Predictions - by Raditzu - 05-09-2007, 02:34 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-09-2007, 02:36 AM
Burter Predictions - by Reijin - 05-09-2007, 03:55 AM
Burter Predictions - by Retane - 05-09-2007, 03:59 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-09-2007, 03:59 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-09-2007, 03:59 AM
Burter Predictions - by Retane - 05-09-2007, 04:28 AM
Burter Predictions - by Nori - 05-09-2007, 01:15 PM
Burter Predictions - by Uno - 05-09-2007, 03:57 PM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-09-2007, 03:59 PM
Burter Predictions - by Krillin - 05-09-2007, 04:10 PM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-09-2007, 04:12 PM
Burter Predictions - by Aqua - 05-09-2007, 04:13 PM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-09-2007, 04:14 PM
Burter Predictions - by Minoshia - 05-09-2007, 06:59 PM
Burter Predictions - by Amadeus - 05-09-2007, 07:16 PM
Burter Predictions - by Nappa - 05-09-2007, 08:22 PM
Burter Predictions - by Bujin - 05-09-2007, 08:55 PM
Burter Predictions - by Old Zangya - 05-10-2007, 02:11 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-10-2007, 02:13 AM
Burter Predictions - by Bra - 05-10-2007, 03:05 AM
Burter Predictions - by Old Zangya - 05-10-2007, 03:33 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-10-2007, 04:15 AM
Burter Predictions - by Old Zangya - 05-10-2007, 04:18 AM
Burter Predictions - by Talys - 05-10-2007, 07:32 PM
Burter Predictions - by Warako - 05-11-2007, 05:10 AM
Burter Predictions - by Banned Doma - 05-12-2007, 05:41 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-12-2007, 05:46 AM
Burter Predictions - by Bardock - 05-12-2007, 08:41 AM
Burter Predictions - by Old Zangya - 05-12-2007, 01:56 PM
Burter Predictions - by King Cold444 - 05-12-2007, 03:47 PM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-12-2007, 07:36 PM
Burter Predictions - by Kami - 05-12-2007, 09:11 PM
Burter Predictions - by Tobias - 05-13-2007, 12:43 AM
Burter Predictions - by Super Buu - 05-22-2007, 06:12 PM
Burter Predictions - by Raspberry - 05-22-2007, 06:15 PM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-22-2007, 06:20 PM
Burter Predictions - by OldSpice - 05-22-2007, 07:41 PM
Burter Predictions - by Mowgli - 05-22-2007, 07:51 PM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-22-2007, 07:52 PM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-22-2007, 07:52 PM
Burter Predictions - by Old Zangya - 05-25-2007, 10:26 PM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-25-2007, 10:28 PM
Burter Predictions - by Old Zangya - 05-25-2007, 10:30 PM
Burter Predictions - by Jinpo - 05-25-2007, 10:30 PM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-25-2007, 10:32 PM
Burter Predictions - by Jinpo - 05-25-2007, 10:36 PM
Burter Predictions - by Android-18 - 05-25-2007, 10:36 PM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-25-2007, 10:39 PM
Burter Predictions - by Vegeta - 05-26-2007, 12:15 AM
Burter Predictions - by Bujin - 05-26-2007, 12:15 AM
Burter Predictions - by Deo - 05-26-2007, 12:16 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-26-2007, 01:59 AM
Burter Predictions - by Olibu - 05-26-2007, 02:01 AM
Burter Predictions - by Uno - 05-26-2007, 02:02 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-26-2007, 02:03 AM
Burter Predictions - by Olibu - 05-26-2007, 02:04 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-26-2007, 02:05 AM
Burter Predictions - by Retane - 05-26-2007, 02:11 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-26-2007, 02:12 AM
Burter Predictions - by Uno - 05-26-2007, 02:13 AM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 05-26-2007, 02:13 AM
Burter Predictions - by Bardock - 05-26-2007, 02:23 AM
Burter Predictions - by Celipa - 05-26-2007, 02:23 AM
Burter Predictions - by Raditzu - 05-26-2007, 03:02 AM
Burter Predictions - by Deo - 05-26-2007, 03:03 AM
Burter Predictions - by Retane - 05-26-2007, 03:08 AM
Burter Predictions - by Deo - 05-26-2007, 03:09 AM
Burter Predictions - by Jinpo - 06-05-2007, 04:27 PM
Burter Predictions - by Burter - 06-05-2007, 04:48 PM

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