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Joining as #15
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05-14-2007, 03:54 AM
The problem with your sample is that you keep going from past and present tense. We perfer that RP's stay in past tense always. You don't need to put * at the start of new paragraphs, either.

Do you have microsoft word? It would help with spelling and other errors.

You should try rereading your RP and fixing it up.
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Joining as #15 - by Joe Android 15 - 05-14-2007, 02:02 AM
Joining as #15 - by Android-18 - 05-14-2007, 03:54 AM
Joining as #15 - by Joe Android 15 - 05-14-2007, 04:24 AM
Joining as #15 - by Joe Android 15 - 05-14-2007, 04:29 AM
Joining as #15 - by Android-18 - 05-14-2007, 05:14 AM
Joining as #15 - by Joe Android 15 - 05-14-2007, 05:17 AM

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