05-22-2007, 06:15 PM
Bulma: B. Dialogue was hilarious but it got a little out of control. Try to read what you write out loud and see how it sounds when it spoken
Jeice: B. Good for what it was (an action post)
Yamu: A.
Raspberry: B.
Jeice: B. Good for what it was (an action post)
Yamu: A.
Raspberry: B.
![[Image: BurterJune08.jpg]](http://frozendust.com/sig/dbz/BurterJune08.jpg)
Want a cookie?

