C&C Request

[Piper Juunanagou]

Thanks a lot, Twenty, and yes, Vapor is and always has been a complete and utter moron. It's just the kind of character he's always been. He'd get every opportunity to kill Seventeen (whether it be an influx of demonic power into his body or the sword of a demigod), but even with the power at his disposal, he always lacked in the mental department...I'm not even sure how he became that way myself.

And I agree with what you said about the expansion posts. At that point, I had pretty much completed the storyline I'd wanted to, and when I needed more posts, I kinda just pulled out a generic plot twist and had a lot of fighting =/

Thanks for reading through all of that though. I know it was a lot of reading, so thank you for expending the time to do so and giving me some feedback.