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Yamu's Feedback Shop II
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04-04-2006, 03:13 AM
You loved it the first time around and now its back. If you would like Yams here to read your stuff and get some in depth feedback, I try and refrain from grammar things unless its so bad it hurts the story, post a link to the post you want critiqued and I'll get to it as soon as possible.
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Yamu's Feedback Shop II - by Yamu - 04-04-2006, 03:13 AM
Yamu's Feedback Shop II - by Kazuya - 04-04-2006, 03:30 AM
Yamu's Feedback Shop II - by CoolSpice - 04-04-2006, 03:32 AM
Yamu's Feedback Shop II - by Piper Juunanagou - 04-04-2006, 11:31 AM
Yamu's Feedback Shop II - by Yamu - 04-05-2006, 03:57 AM
Yamu's Feedback Shop II - by Yamu - 04-05-2006, 10:05 PM
Yamu's Feedback Shop II - by Yamu - 04-06-2006, 01:40 AM
Yamu's Feedback Shop II - by Yamu - 04-06-2006, 02:00 AM
Yamu's Feedback Shop II - by Yamu - 04-08-2006, 10:25 PM
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