06-01-2007, 02:07 AM
Retane looked around, his vision dazed. He tried to sit up, but found himself weak, and worn. His head throbbed in pain and he placed his good hand upon his head. It felt weird. The mercenary took a deep, long breath of air into his lungs as he played back the recent battle. Things were hard to picture. He had took two out, but his ally, his comrade, his freind, had died!
They killed him right in his face! Tapion was dead and it was his fault! The namekian wanted to growl, wanted to scream, but he couldn't he couldn't find the energy to. Tears sweld into his eyes. His hand moved from his head to his chest, his heart, it ached. The rogue couldn't explain it but he actually cared for his Konat comrade. But the red alien had got him! He had killed him!
As the water leaked from his face, a grim frown erected on the jade warriors face. Finally, he lifted himself and looked to the ground. Minoshia and Tapion were both dead. There was nothing he could do about it, except extract revenge. The bald human, that connected a bat with his head, he had the smell of death on him, and the smell of Mino! His comrades killed Tapion! The bald huamn would die!
Once again his hand raised his hand to his head, trying to calm himself down. He noticed then that it felt weird, it ached everywhere. He saw, or noticed rather that his left eye and ear no longer worked. A mirror would have revealed that his eye was turned backwards, and the stem of the back of the eye was in the place of where his cornea use to.
His anger only furthered him to move on. He pushed himself up with both hands, pushing past the pain in his wrist. His mind flashed back to the moment where he had given the Ki Sheild to Tapion.
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"Here", the namek offered, unclasping the sheild from his forearm. Tapion looked at Retane in surprise, his facial expression in full shock. Retane wasn't one for giving up his advantages. All he could do was accept it and give a nod of appreciation.
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He began to walk as other thoughts returned to his mind. Reijin, he was involved in MOA, where Retane had been cut to his death. The saiyan was neither an enemy, nor a foe, but that didn't stop Retane from wanting to kill him as well. He, nor Vegeta could stop Yamu from bashing his head in. They weren't good allies, neither was he though.
Bra, she resembled Bulma but from the conversations she heard, she was Vegeta's daughter. Retane had all the more reason to kill her now, as he hated them and he blamed them for Tapions death. It was all there fault! Even the old Namek! Kami! He deserved to die too!
But then, there was Bardock, the Hunter, just like him! HE respected the saiyan, but iuf he got in his way, then he'd die too!
"Tapion, they will all die. That's my mission! I will kill them all just for you! To avenge you death." The rogue wiped his eyes, and started off, his one good eye focusing straight ahead, his Nail gun at the ready.
They killed him right in his face! Tapion was dead and it was his fault! The namekian wanted to growl, wanted to scream, but he couldn't he couldn't find the energy to. Tears sweld into his eyes. His hand moved from his head to his chest, his heart, it ached. The rogue couldn't explain it but he actually cared for his Konat comrade. But the red alien had got him! He had killed him!
As the water leaked from his face, a grim frown erected on the jade warriors face. Finally, he lifted himself and looked to the ground. Minoshia and Tapion were both dead. There was nothing he could do about it, except extract revenge. The bald human, that connected a bat with his head, he had the smell of death on him, and the smell of Mino! His comrades killed Tapion! The bald huamn would die!
Once again his hand raised his hand to his head, trying to calm himself down. He noticed then that it felt weird, it ached everywhere. He saw, or noticed rather that his left eye and ear no longer worked. A mirror would have revealed that his eye was turned backwards, and the stem of the back of the eye was in the place of where his cornea use to.
His anger only furthered him to move on. He pushed himself up with both hands, pushing past the pain in his wrist. His mind flashed back to the moment where he had given the Ki Sheild to Tapion.
-----
"Here", the namek offered, unclasping the sheild from his forearm. Tapion looked at Retane in surprise, his facial expression in full shock. Retane wasn't one for giving up his advantages. All he could do was accept it and give a nod of appreciation.
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He began to walk as other thoughts returned to his mind. Reijin, he was involved in MOA, where Retane had been cut to his death. The saiyan was neither an enemy, nor a foe, but that didn't stop Retane from wanting to kill him as well. He, nor Vegeta could stop Yamu from bashing his head in. They weren't good allies, neither was he though.
Bra, she resembled Bulma but from the conversations she heard, she was Vegeta's daughter. Retane had all the more reason to kill her now, as he hated them and he blamed them for Tapions death. It was all there fault! Even the old Namek! Kami! He deserved to die too!
But then, there was Bardock, the Hunter, just like him! HE respected the saiyan, but iuf he got in his way, then he'd die too!
"Tapion, they will all die. That's my mission! I will kill them all just for you! To avenge you death." The rogue wiped his eyes, and started off, his one good eye focusing straight ahead, his Nail gun at the ready.
First and current League Champion: Holder of the Torrent badge of Earth.
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