Quality or Quantity?

[Kazuya]

Originally posted by King Chapa
There is some irony in what you said Vi, for in your latest post in your spar I found a typo.

He leg shot up and connected with the Saiyan's temple, sending him sailing through the feild, but he had reached out with one hand, grasping at the ground, and stopped, twisting his trajectory to dart back towards her again, and this time, the payload he delivered was one she would not soon forget.

Unless Vi had some sort of surgery that I don't know about, it should be:

Her leg shot up and connected with the Saiyan's temple, sending him sailing through the feild, but he had reached out with one hand, grasping at the ground, and stopped, twisting his trajectory to dart back towards her again, and this time, the payload he delivered was one she would not soon forget.

Aside from that little "mishap" I agree wholeheartedly with everything you all are saying, so lets keep this going.

Like I had said, I am guilty of the typo thing myself, but that whole thing was done without spellchecker. I tell you though, working within this community will improve your writing skills immmensly. I know I have improved since I began, and some stuff from my earlier posts kind of contradict my newer, plotholes, etc. But, I have to admit, I don't believe I post many things that could be qualified as sub par.

But my advice to the new crowd is to keep working at it, take your time, and reread your work. Always rereading your work, you can find things that you may not have caught previously, and if you do this preventative measure, you can beat the ten minute posting rule like the naughty dog it is.