04-12-2006, 09:27 PM
Quote:Originally posted by YamuA good writer would either have you so enthralled you wouldn't want to leave or would have natural stopping points within the roleplay. ;)
Giving the reader conveineint stopping points is nice as when I'm online I'm usually doing 20 other things and being able to read to a spot and get a nice logical ending then coming back is appreciated.
Quote:Originally posted by Burter JrThey aren't as good as they could be. It doesn't bring me in as much. =\
I write small posts, does that mean my writing sucks?
That's what some of your arguements are pretty much saying.
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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