C&C on "Take Two"

[Belle Hibiki]

Considering that I am almost done with my current quest, I thought it would be a good idea to put out a request for general comments and critiques (like I did with my "Veni Vidi Vici" spiritken thread). It might be a little late to improve upon for this particular thread, but at least I can make improvements in the future >_>

So yeah! C&C please.

Link to "Take Two"