04-24-2006, 02:16 AM
Here.
Can i get some feedback on this, it has barely touched the surface plot wise, I'm looking for more comments and criticism on the writing, because this is my first Personal Roleplay in a while, and i'm trying to kinda take a new curve on things, So just hit me back with anything from Hardcore hate to nice comments, i don't how indepth, but be honest. Thank you for your time.
Can i get some feedback on this, it has barely touched the surface plot wise, I'm looking for more comments and criticism on the writing, because this is my first Personal Roleplay in a while, and i'm trying to kinda take a new curve on things, So just hit me back with anything from Hardcore hate to nice comments, i don't how indepth, but be honest. Thank you for your time.
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