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Feedback aye?
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Lemme break it down, Minoshia is being held captive in a small cottage, and is being forced to tell all he knows about 'The Organization'. Everything after the first two posts is teh story he is telling so far (in italics) where he is being framed for beind a big honcho in this 'organization' and etc, they (the organization) are breaking him out of prison and are about to kill him for knowing too much about themselves and hope that Minoshia's death will bring about the police thinking the real man they are looking for has died. Read it and give me C&C, the plot is just touching the tip of the iceberg.
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Feedback aye? - by Alexander Trafford - 04-24-2006, 02:16 AM
Feedback aye? - by Ander - 04-26-2006, 08:00 AM
Feedback aye? - by Alexander Trafford - 05-12-2006, 03:00 AM
Feedback aye? - by Ander - 05-14-2006, 12:16 PM
Feedback aye? - by Alexander Trafford - 05-23-2006, 12:35 AM

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