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[Ander]

Again, I must remark on your description. Sometimes people can't find the balance between too much and not enough. You spent a few sentences elaborating on a piece of paper, and yet it was completely relevant. It showed a bit of personality and emotion from Augustus. Noice.

All I can tell you is keep going, because I'm anxious to read more. Your build-up is moving along a little faster than I prefer, but at least nothing is stale: Mino is interrogated, thrown in the slammer, and forced to consort with its low-life denizens. Plus, we have conspiracy, which is always fun to try and unravel.

I recommend this as a good read to any and everyone.