Broken Road

[Kami]

Already with the fact that I enjoy your stuff in mind...I liked it, it's not much so far, but the thing that I enjoy is how your encorperating BJ's naive nature into the way you'r writing him. He doesn't know exactly what it going on, the less than pleasant ways of the world are new to him. It's a nice change of pace from the pre-packaged, already battle hardened veteran many people simply begin with by crafting a back story that could have been written through many long posts. Keep it up, I think it's heading in a good direction thus far.