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Been a while
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I like how you roleplay, Goho. He's a fighter...but not exsactly by choice. Instead of a teenager dealing with girls and cars, he's dealing with planetary destruction and death.

You put solid emotion into your writing with loosing the beleivability. Even as he is slashing his wrist it doesn't feel melo-dramatic, it feels real, a boy on the end of his rope who just wants a way out.

You use NPC like no one else. Most writers either treat them like garbage or a life long companion, you make them veleivabe people form the girl, to Shiir to the cat. The become part of the story not just another way to tell the same story.

I admire your in dpeth writing that is at the same time realistic and never boring. I am proud to be in an Alliance with you...please forgive the long time it took to get around to this.
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Been a while - by Toshiro - 05-09-2006, 12:38 PM
Been a while - by Ander - 05-14-2006, 12:05 PM
Been a while - by Toshiro - 05-15-2006, 07:48 PM
Been a while - by Yamu - 05-17-2006, 06:28 PM

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