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05-22-2008, 04:16 AM
I know you've read it, but hopefully this RP will and the ones before it in the saga will be an improvement from last year. I wanted to know what kind of grade it is. Also, I know it's stupid, but I want to improve to be a top writer that people always mention like Rad, Rei and you. Any advice on what I should alter in my style would be most appreciated.

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Burter's Grades - by Burter - 05-22-2008, 02:59 AM
Burter's Grades - by Zangya - 05-22-2008, 03:00 AM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 05-22-2008, 03:01 AM
Burter's Grades - by Violet - 05-22-2008, 03:02 AM
Burter's Grades - by Zangya - 05-22-2008, 03:03 AM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 05-22-2008, 03:03 AM
Burter's Grades - by Vazko - 05-22-2008, 03:05 AM
Burter's Grades - by Raditzu - 05-22-2008, 03:05 AM
Burter's Grades - by Reijin - 05-22-2008, 03:10 AM
Burter's Grades - by Raditzu - 05-22-2008, 03:16 AM
Burter's Grades - by Reijin - 05-22-2008, 03:21 AM
Burter's Grades - by Raditzu - 05-22-2008, 03:23 AM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 05-22-2008, 03:30 AM
Burter's Grades - by Reijin - 05-22-2008, 03:41 AM
Burter's Grades - by Android-18 - 05-22-2008, 04:16 AM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 05-22-2008, 04:20 AM
Burter's Grades - by Android-18 - 05-22-2008, 04:20 AM
Burter's Grades - by Android 17 - 05-22-2008, 04:58 AM
Burter's Grades - by Minoshia - 05-22-2008, 07:10 PM
Burter's Grades - by Android-18 - 05-25-2008, 06:10 AM
Burter's Grades - by Zangya - 05-27-2008, 11:51 PM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-01-2008, 06:06 AM
Burter's Grades - by Warako - 06-01-2008, 06:09 AM
Burter's Grades - by Talys - 06-01-2008, 06:12 AM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-01-2008, 06:24 AM
Burter's Grades - by Zangya - 06-01-2008, 06:26 AM
Burter's Grades - by Bardock - 06-01-2008, 06:39 AM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-01-2008, 06:43 AM
Burter's Grades - by Uno - 06-01-2008, 06:45 AM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-01-2008, 06:46 AM
Burter's Grades - by Paragus - 06-01-2008, 07:07 AM
Burter's Grades - by Android-18 - 06-01-2008, 07:14 AM
Burter's Grades - by Talys - 06-01-2008, 07:18 AM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-01-2008, 07:32 AM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-01-2008, 07:38 AM
Burter's Grades - by Tapion - 06-01-2008, 07:40 AM
Burter's Grades - by Android-18 - 06-01-2008, 07:43 AM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-01-2008, 07:45 AM
Burter's Grades - by Retane - 06-01-2008, 07:53 AM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-01-2008, 08:07 AM
Burter's Grades - by Minoshia - 06-01-2008, 10:36 PM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-01-2008, 10:37 PM
Burter's Grades - by Celipa - 06-01-2008, 10:38 PM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-01-2008, 10:40 PM
Burter's Grades - by Bujin - 06-01-2008, 10:41 PM
Burter's Grades - by Vazko - 06-01-2008, 10:42 PM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-01-2008, 10:45 PM
Burter's Grades - by Android 17 - 06-02-2008, 12:08 AM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-02-2008, 03:15 AM
Burter's Grades - by Warako - 06-02-2008, 04:30 AM
Burter's Grades - by Aero - 06-02-2008, 05:04 AM
Burter's Grades - by Zangya - 06-02-2008, 05:06 AM
Burter's Grades - by Reijin - 06-02-2008, 05:44 AM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-03-2008, 01:37 AM
Burter's Grades - by Hellfighter 17 - 06-03-2008, 01:40 AM
Burter's Grades - by Bujin - 06-03-2008, 01:40 AM
Burter's Grades - by Reijin - 06-03-2008, 01:41 AM
Burter's Grades - by Minoshia - 06-03-2008, 01:43 AM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-03-2008, 01:55 AM
Burter's Grades - by Uno - 06-03-2008, 01:57 AM
Burter's Grades - by Retane - 06-03-2008, 02:04 AM
Burter's Grades - by Talys - 06-03-2008, 02:07 AM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-03-2008, 02:38 AM
Burter's Grades - by Android 17 - 06-03-2008, 02:43 AM
Burter's Grades - by Paragus - 06-03-2008, 03:20 AM
Burter's Grades - by Violet - 06-03-2008, 03:23 AM
Burter's Grades - by Minoshia - 06-03-2008, 10:01 PM
Burter's Grades - by Burter - 06-04-2008, 03:09 AM
Burter's Grades - by Celipa - 06-04-2008, 03:12 AM
Burter's Grades - by Uno - 06-04-2008, 03:13 AM
Burter's Grades - by Retane - 06-04-2008, 04:19 AM
Burter's Grades - by Paragus - 06-04-2008, 04:21 AM
Burter's Grades - by Reijin - 06-04-2008, 04:23 AM
Burter's Grades - by Paragus - 06-04-2008, 04:25 AM
Burter's Grades - by Reijin - 06-04-2008, 04:28 AM
Burter's Grades - by Paragus - 06-04-2008, 04:30 AM
Burter's Grades - by Retane - 06-04-2008, 04:31 AM
Burter's Grades - by Minoshia - 06-05-2008, 02:18 AM
Burter's Grades - by Bardock - 06-05-2008, 02:21 AM
Burter's Grades - by Reijin - 06-05-2008, 04:07 AM

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