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Broken Road
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Quote:Originally posted by Burter Jr
The poem portrays that Junior has run into that fork in the road, and he's taking the one less travelled by. As the title suggests, it's the Broken Road.
Four people in my english did that for a poetry presentation. I wasn't there that day. >.>

I just rea dthe whole thing, and I liked it. Not too much stands out to me except for how you portray characters, I like it a lot. The only thing I din't like wa sthe owner's first reaction. I know he might be scared about the debt and BJ doesn't exactly look normal, but ti seemed a bit exaggerated. Otherwise, it was altight.
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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Broken Road - by Burter Jr - 05-17-2006, 06:23 AM
Broken Road - by Kami - 05-17-2006, 07:18 AM
Broken Road - by Yamu - 05-17-2006, 06:24 PM
Broken Road - by Burter Jr - 05-17-2006, 06:32 PM
Broken Road - by Yamu - 05-17-2006, 06:38 PM
Broken Road - by Burter Jr - 05-17-2006, 06:39 PM
Broken Road - by Rose - 05-17-2006, 06:48 PM
Broken Road - by Burter Jr - 05-17-2006, 06:52 PM
Broken Road - by Ruhiel - 05-17-2006, 10:27 PM
Broken Road - by Burter Jr - 05-18-2006, 01:55 AM
Broken Road - by Ruhiel - 05-18-2006, 01:58 AM
Broken Road - by Burter Jr - 05-18-2006, 02:07 AM
Broken Road - by Burter Jr - 05-18-2006, 03:09 AM
Broken Road - by Sage - 05-18-2006, 03:10 AM
Broken Road - by Hellfighter 17 - 05-18-2006, 03:30 AM
Broken Road - by Burter Jr - 05-18-2006, 03:34 AM
Broken Road - by Burter Jr - 05-23-2006, 07:09 PM
Broken Road - by Rose - 05-23-2006, 09:36 PM
Broken Road - by Burter Jr - 05-23-2006, 09:47 PM
Broken Road - by Rose - 05-23-2006, 09:55 PM
Broken Road - by Hellfighter 17 - 05-23-2006, 09:58 PM
Broken Road - by Burter Jr - 05-23-2006, 10:01 PM

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