05-18-2006, 03:30 AM
Quote:Originally posted by Burter JrFour people in my english did that for a poetry presentation. I wasn't there that day. >.>
The poem portrays that Junior has run into that fork in the road, and he's taking the one less travelled by. As the title suggests, it's the Broken Road.
I just rea dthe whole thing, and I liked it. Not too much stands out to me except for how you portray characters, I like it a lot. The only thing I din't like wa sthe owner's first reaction. I know he might be scared about the debt and BJ doesn't exactly look normal, but ti seemed a bit exaggerated. Otherwise, it was altight.
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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