CnC game

[Aero]

Tapion:


It just seemed like a nicely worded post. Nothing else. Didn't give any type of feeling or tone. And there was no reason to go into a spasm of detail about things that really meant nothing. You would've been better off without the detail, to be honest.

Lastly, and the most annoying part, was the fact that it was a typical post. It was one of those posts that you felt as if you've read a hundred times. (i.e. examining the contents in the bag). Things like that just get old after you read it from various fighters. You could have remedied that by adding some mental thoughts or emotion and not just "Plotting plans". You don't even have to be truthful about the emotions or whatnot. You coul've just put some vague plans. Or, even better, you could've written about a possible revenge that correlated with the items in your bag.


So, basically, I back Burter's grade. It just seemed excruciatingly bland. I expected better from someone that killed in in the previous DA. =P



Me:
http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showpost.ph...stcount=14




EDIT: FUCK! All right, I'll give you CnC, Zang, just give me a moment.