Minoshia Wrote:classy introduction post i'd say. Really good detail in your writing, i could picture exactly what your describing down to the dime. Also i liked how you implemented how Violet was feeling about the situation, but you were blatant , ie "violet was feeling alone and vulnerable". you worked everything together very nicely to create a fluid post that i enjoyed reading, i'll be following your character throughout this entire thing. im very interested to see how this thing with bardock turns out and i thought it was a good idea to get him into this post a little, also showing how she was feeling.
Excellent introduction post, keep up the detail.
mine
http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showthread....post459467
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That whole post was epic, man. You quite deserved the A Burt gave you on it. I love seeing you play a bad guy, because you're one of those people who pretend to be bad and have such generic reasons why (Not really describing anyone here, i'm just making a generalization), Mino is just a bad ass like that.
You worked the ex-alliance betrayal in well, I always love seeing that kind of emotion, and how it just compliments his nefarious mannerisms.
Overall, its something that i would read again and again, and never really burn out on. I'll be watching you
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