Wow.
I love the emotion. I actually almost felt myself cry on this one. At points where it seemed like you were getting repetitive, you brought more intense emotion, which made me forget what I thought I disliked. The one complaint I have, however, is the typos. My god there were a lot of typos. Like every sentence there was a new typo. If you would've proofread the post you would've been way better off.
My rank: B-
Mine: http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showpost.ph...stcount=26
I love the emotion. I actually almost felt myself cry on this one. At points where it seemed like you were getting repetitive, you brought more intense emotion, which made me forget what I thought I disliked. The one complaint I have, however, is the typos. My god there were a lot of typos. Like every sentence there was a new typo. If you would've proofread the post you would've been way better off.
My rank: B-
Mine: http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showpost.ph...stcount=26
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Placed 3rd in Dante's Abyss 08