Like I told you before, it was a pretty good post, and one of your better ones.
And, like most of the posts I C&C, any correction I could make would just be nit-picking, so let me start with the positives. First off, I thought the post as a whole was mildly amusing and very entertaining -- I liked how you focused on how Aero felt after the fight with 17. It could possibly set you up for loads of fodder later on down the line, so this post was a good start. All-in-all, I could definitely tell how pissed off Aero was, so you were successful to those ends.
Hell, I know I said I'd nit-pick, but any negative I have to say is so insignificant that I won't even mention it. Good job, you bastard. =P
Yeah, I'm a C&C whore: http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showpost.ph...stcount=35
And, like most of the posts I C&C, any correction I could make would just be nit-picking, so let me start with the positives. First off, I thought the post as a whole was mildly amusing and very entertaining -- I liked how you focused on how Aero felt after the fight with 17. It could possibly set you up for loads of fodder later on down the line, so this post was a good start. All-in-all, I could definitely tell how pissed off Aero was, so you were successful to those ends.
Hell, I know I said I'd nit-pick, but any negative I have to say is so insignificant that I won't even mention it. Good job, you bastard. =P
Yeah, I'm a C&C whore: http://www.cdbzrpg.com/forum/showpost.ph...stcount=35
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