06-09-2006, 05:33 AM
Trapdoors and Tree Huggers
I've been doing this quest as a thing on the side for... a little less then half a year I take it, nevertheless I've yet to get any opinions on it.
In general it's my first attempt at a massive involving storyline where there is history derived not only from the main character (Goten) but from other minor characters as well, giving the story depth as I hope it would.
If anyone has any honest opinions about it, taken the time to read it all and enjoyed it, or has any creative advice on how I can improve my writing ability I'd love to hear it. Very much appreciation to who ever has already and followed along, the ending to it is coming in the very near future.
I've been doing this quest as a thing on the side for... a little less then half a year I take it, nevertheless I've yet to get any opinions on it.
In general it's my first attempt at a massive involving storyline where there is history derived not only from the main character (Goten) but from other minor characters as well, giving the story depth as I hope it would.
If anyone has any honest opinions about it, taken the time to read it all and enjoyed it, or has any creative advice on how I can improve my writing ability I'd love to hear it. Very much appreciation to who ever has already and followed along, the ending to it is coming in the very near future.