06-13-2006, 07:22 AM
I wanted to use Word, but unfortunately, my office got f'ed. And uhh...I didn't throw any plot elements except that he found out that he is a clone and Toma is now Dr. Raichi. Also I didn't pick up where Toma left off, I actually will have a totally different story for him...once I manage to make a few more posts. I wanted to say, I especially wanted C&C on my grammar, because the development stuff, I'll resolve in the next posts. I was thinking of 10 posts in which I clear up the stuff. M'kay?
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A decade ago, I never thought I would be, at twenty-three, on the verge of spontaneous combustion. Woe-is-me.

