06-21-2006, 07:08 PM
Yes, sorry about that; slipped my mind, but I will make sure to do it for the future.
It should sound weird 'cause it is incomplete. I guess I forgot to put a word in. Thanks for pointing that out. I didn't notice that before. Alliteration, which I hate, and some other figurative langauge I forget, apparently. If I could change Reijin's title it would be that. Yea, I go karaoke, too, and I try to incorporate things that I do normally but seem weird into roleplays.
It wasn't soda, it was vodka--part of an ongoing thing about HF I've been doing. It would've been made distinct in my next roleplay, but meh. I like that the misdirection was good, it should be a recurring theme if I remember,
Thanks for all the criticism, B.
EDIT:
It should sound weird 'cause it is incomplete. I guess I forgot to put a word in. Thanks for pointing that out. I didn't notice that before. Alliteration, which I hate, and some other figurative langauge I forget, apparently. If I could change Reijin's title it would be that. Yea, I go karaoke, too, and I try to incorporate things that I do normally but seem weird into roleplays.
It wasn't soda, it was vodka--part of an ongoing thing about HF I've been doing. It would've been made distinct in my next roleplay, but meh. I like that the misdirection was good, it should be a recurring theme if I remember,
Thanks for all the criticism, B.
EDIT:
Quote:Originally posted by Hellfighter 17Nevermind. =P
It would've been made distinct in my next roleplay
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